Blog Comment

Mrs. Hayes just wanted you to know that these are my comments on  Amarri Oats, Atley Green,and Calaijah Broadnax Blogs. Thank you.

Amarri Oats
Hi Amarri its Malika Smith. I just wanted to let you know that I like Your blogs. I also wanted to tell you I have never read this book so if you could just elaborate on your book some more, that would be great. Also i have some questions for you about your book which are why do you think Indians are cool? What do you really think bout this book? If you will add more of the story to the end or just conclude the paragraph. But i just really wanted to tell you that you are a good writer.

Atley Green
Hi Atley its Malika smith. I just wanted you to know you have a good blog. But in your paragraph you can elaborate or move your sentences around to make them flow. But your sentences really tell me about your book. I just wanted to know somethings,why doesn't she have friends now? Did she have friends before the accident? How long was Claeb in jail?Overall you have a good blog and it makes me want to read the book. 

Calaijah Broadnax
Hi Calaijah Its Malika Smith. I wanted to tell you that you shouldn't put all your information on the internet like you said in this paragraph. Also you didn't tell anything about the book you read. So if you could tell more about it you would probably do better. Overall you just need to add some details but you picture you pictked out really tell meh that some things were really goin on in your book to make you want to read it. Thanks for listening.